Ii actually like the text in this one. Adds a nice feminine touch to it to go with the overall tag. My biggest thing is the light source seems too overpowering. I'd try a simpler technique: Use the dodge tool slightly where the light source SHOULD be, and then use the burn tool to darken up the rest of the sig a bit. a little goes a long way in this case. Nice FX around the render, nice placement, but i'd like to see some more "feminine" colors to go with the tag. Orange doesn't really seem like it suits it in this case. Pretty nice. How long you been doing GFX?