My Newest Work In Progress

Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by Sh00tevery1, Jun 2, 2009.

  1. Jun 2, 2009 at 10:05 PM #1
    Sh00tevery1

    Sh00tevery1 Well-Known Member

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    Well you know they drill. What is good about this image. What is bad about this image. Why is it bad? How can I make it not bad? Please don't be shy when giving me some C&C, how else will I get better?

    Thanks
     
  2. Jun 2, 2009 at 11:24 PM #2
    Neuron

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    Could be more colors, it's a bit monotonous right now.

    Apart from that and a few minor errors that I picked up on (planet shadowing and edges), it looks fine to me.
     
  3. Jun 3, 2009 at 4:03 AM #3
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    a good start from what i'm seein, the top panet is too linear & what neuron said
     

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