My Newest Signature.

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Brandon™, Jun 12, 2009.

  1. Brandon™

    Brandon™ Member

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    I didn't spend a lot of time on this sig (yes i know, it sucks), but here it is..

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    Comments on how I can improve it would be helpful.
     
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    You can start by moving that render slightly to the left. The background is plain. If you want to go for that monotone colour, then I suggest more detail in the background in for form of smudging or a stock or a C4d. I like the use of red here, adds some colour so you were on the right track with that. The text is bad, it shouldnt be all over the place, try keeping it in one area unless you really feel throwing it all over the place is a good idea. It looks like you're using brushes here, maybe you should try a different technique out and see how that goes. Good attempt, keep it up
     
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    dont like it since its lacking depth and i dont like the stroke around the render but thats my opinion , go to deviantart or something and look at tutorials
     
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    Thanks for the advice guys.

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    That any better?
     
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    thats way better mate gj :) just blend the render in abit more and it will be awsome
     
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    Added a cyan photo filter to try to blend the render in a little better.
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