it looks nice man render does look cool i think you should experiment with some color dodge layers of c4ds for added depth, not totally necessary but u may enjoy it :/
You're getting better. It's still not great, some of the effects need some work. Lighting too. But it's well on it's way. ^_^ Don't take me too harshly, cause I'm trying to be as honest as possible so that you can get better. Keep it up.
thank you both for the critique! i just made a new tag ima post in like 2 minutes and i think its way better. i know not to take offense to critique because its to help people develop and hone there skills but thanks! btw i dont know how to use CD4s otherwise id try it. when i dl them there not rendered so i dont know what to do...