My New Storie

The only thing i see wrong is you used "I was in Heaven" and "arched my back" a lot. other than that very talented writter

 

Haha Xd. I have another one to..But it is still in progress, i have a main coopy of chap one and 2, but still fixing em up.

Sides, i was in heaven and lots of back arching was involved

Jesse

 

Well no..I wasn't really talking about your story, just a question in general cuz there's this one gay dude at my school, and he's acts....umm......Overly-gay(<---dont know if thats a word) anywas, just forget it........

Strong story, you should publish a book or something...

 

Hehe. Overly gay *giggles* I can be like that sumtimes

Btw, i wanna be a writer to hehe.

Jesse

 

Ummm ok ,I am a little freakd out , could you like change him to a she or the other way...
its a nice story but I dont enjoy this topic that much

 

im sorry to say but that was some disturbing ----..

first of all, this forum has mostly people the age of 14-15 and younger so you might want to slap on the good ol' [ADULT] tag

second, i agree with Sephiroth Obl.G, but since when did being homosexual mean all you wanted to do was have sex with another man or woman? i thought it meant much more

no offense or anything man but i found a lot of things in that story really gross.. being gay doesnt necessarily mean all you want to do is have sex i think.. i respect that you're gay and all but lets just keep it to a good level and not take it this far..

despite all that stuff, you're still a good writer and maybe try writing some fictional stuff.. i think people would be more interested in that than some gay sex fantasy

 

exactly. what cheeky said.

 

Thats exactly want I tried to say...keep it at a level. Gays try to be more femenine right? but Like cheeky said, thats no excuse to act like you want sex all the time...

 

its true... i havent seen a normal gay person

what is the definition of gay these days?

a horny person that just wants to have sex with someone of the same gender...

its just wrong man.. i dont really believe in this stuff, its really weird

im not telling you what to do in life but you're still young man, 15 is pretty young and i think you should be thinking about better things and leave this stuff last and focus on school or hobbies and everything..

just curious.. what caused you to turn gay?

 

"After about 10 minutes, he was fully inside me. It felt so great."

Ten minutes... Ten f**kin' minutes.

Only three things can explain this:
1) Ryan has a teeny tiny weeny.
2) You have a tigh asshole.
3) Your anus was loaded with ---- so he had to push it aside.

Nice.

 

lol crazyass Animus...

 

LMFAO!!!!!

 

*Closed*

Sorry, your post is too short and must be made more detailed. Omg