here we go be nice please i tried something totally different by the way the reason i put it black and white was i got half way through it and saw i had the setting on B&W so i just carried on take one for the team
move those lines so that they dont cross the mouth and the right eye. a little too bright for me nice c4d composition i feel like something's wrong with your lighting (or is it just me) i like those white fog like stuff text placement is meh
Awesome sig.. text could be worked much much better and theres no lightsource. also you should clear stuff off the face.