My Laotm Entry

lp arent really my strong point but im quite proud of this



p.s c4d credit goes to angellus hellion on deviant art for his excellent c4d packs

 

I'm liking this. The lighting is a bit awkward, but it doesn't matter much here.

The background is a bit plain though.

 

thanks neuron

more feedback plz ?

 

Looks really good. My only suggestion would be to crop it, which you did for your signature.

 

Thats really nice, if you're still into editing it a bit remove those green pixel spray dots and have a tree growing out of the C4D or a waterfall or something like that to add some color variation.
I love the text though

 

Try to blend it a little more and add stuff the the bg, maybe take out some C4D. Hard to see the BG.

 

i would be proud as well...great job imo!!

 

Nice Job M8. I think the colors clash to much. Maybe make the Letters a Yellowish Green?

 

thanks guys ill take your stuff into consideration and try some other stuff with it tonight