What do you guys think....i added some "fake" text/tech brshes...didnt realyl help it...neotehr idea's/rating if its good enuff?
If you can pull it off, I'd say try an make it look like the jet on the left is cutting through air.. Kinda like a motion blur type deal? Know what I'm sayin kinda? =/ Like use the bushes you used to do the light popping through the clouds an give some curve to them going around the jet... I duno, prolly dumb idea, buts it an idea! Other then that it looks pretty good.
I was an idiot, and blended the render with the BG..and saved it, quit and went back in, so i cant put the "light" coming thru the plane, but it was on the side, and ill try putting sum motion blue type things on and see how it turns out =) Here is what i came up wit...like he is flying in the same direnction--
