My First

for a first thats really good dude, nice job

 

Good Job, Could Have Done A Little Better On The Wings But Its Your First Time So Its Still Good.

 

good try but its choppy

 

good for the 1 time but it is choppy u will get it man

 

This render is done many times man xD

Anyway, nice rendering m8

Gj, keep it up

 

nice done for your first, little choppy on the wings though

 

Like everyone said, it's choppy in a lot of places, but it's ok for your first.

 

choppy but its ur first
wat tool did u use?

 

ye its cool i doubt id use it tho looking for more scary render

 

i would recommend using the quick mask tool for hard areas like the wings

 

Good effort for a first try, though as mentioned before, the wings are eh.

 

It's choppy everywhere. You should try again.