criticism is always gonna be harsh when you first start out so take it lightly and as you continue to progress then you can actually get some constructive criticism and progress even more. Keep reading tuts to learn new techniques, and remember, experimenting is always a good way to learn. good luck young buck
As said above its gonna be harsh. First of erase the uploaded by image shack part out of you signature. Well,It has no blending at all.(try smudging)No depth at all (try blurring,Burning,and C4ds in FG).Little effects,and they don't match the render(use color schemed C4ds and fractals).The Bg looks cool,but does not match the render.No lighting (use at large soft brush to create lighting) Render looks Crappy,The BG does not help.Text is to big and distracting,also it should NEVER be in the corner. Btw,What GFX Program are you using.If your using gimp i have a few old Newb tuts laying around.And if your Using PS Cs5 i will have a tut up soon I wil pm it if you want.