My First Render

I heard about this site from a friend when I asked where he got all his game pictures. I have been using it for a couple weeks now and I have decided to try to give back to the community. This is my first render so go easy on me and yes I already know that Halo Renders are overated and that this has probably already been done many times, but hey it was a cool picture! I have 2 versions, because the first version had some white lines and i attempted to fix it. Tell me how it is for a first render.

Original:
http://www.hardwired.hu/img/hir2/halo-2-20...7091158280.jpeg

Render Version 1:


Render Version 2:

 

Hey not bad but its been done way too much..nice try for your first

 

Choppy but nt for a first mate

 

Pretty good, me thinks. The second one is much better, btw.

 

really nice for a first render.

 

alittle choppy man..but great job for a first render....should have picked a easier one but u did a good job

 

Thanks! What would be considered easier? And what could I do to make my renders better?

 

version 2 is definetly better, very good work for a first

 

Could someone explain what credits can do and why I had one and now I have six? And whoever is giving them to me thank you!

 

the first one is too choppy and the second one is too feathered.

 

2nd one better

 

Pretty good for a first mate, keep it up

 

pretty neat cut. thanks for sharing it out with us !

 

Nice Render man

 

Nice cut man!