My First Render

Now, this is my first time ive done a render, so be nice, i do want feed back tho. also im not to sure if someone has done a render like this before so.


Original






Render







, well, give feedback please.


:censored: ! i forgot to put this in the non-gaming renders, if a mod could move it , it would be aprecated!. lol sorry, its late and im not thinking right.

 

Its nice but I can still see some white

 

'eh i know, i wasent too sure what i was doing at that part, as you can tell on HIS right sholder its alot better, i started figuring out what i was doing. so its getting there.

 

good job on your first render, but ya theres a lot of white spots.

 

BUMP

yeah, im gona try another one today so, hope it will be better since i know now how to do it i think.