I really sorry but I cant find the source so you could just delete this thread. I apologize. I'll be careful next time.
Definatly Not bad for your first but i see a lil white outline around some of it.. keep it up and you will get better
looks nice for the first better then mine kilamike i think some of those white marks should be there.
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