My First Render As Well

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  1. Feb 22, 2006 at 9:46 AM #1
    MistFit

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    When submitting your render, please remember to include:

    - Where the image originally comes from. Site link, forum link, or Google link

    This is where I got the image from...
    Image Link

    - Information about permission you have gained to cut out the image if it came from DeviantArt, cgtalk.com or any other website in which artists submit their own work.

    Erm... I hope I didn't need permission... Please let me know if I do.

    One of my favorite quotes...
    "It's always easier to ask forgivness than permission"


    After reading Elrics wonderful indepth tutorial about how to render an image I decided to try one myself

    Link to the image hosted at imageshack
    Link to Elrics Tut

    This is the result... Please let me know (in detail) what I need to do to improve my work.

    [​IMG]

    I posted this in Elrics tut but I will repeat it again.
     
  2. Feb 22, 2006 at 9:59 AM #2
    Spunky Monkey

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    I was going to do this one as my first one lol...


    but good one keep it up
     
  3. Feb 22, 2006 at 12:45 PM #3
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    Pretty good for a first
     
  4. Feb 22, 2006 at 1:04 PM #4
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    If anyone has suggestions on how to make "pretty good" to "great" I would appreciate it.

    Hard to get better if I do not know what to change :D

    btw... thanks for the responses
     
  5. Feb 22, 2006 at 1:25 PM #5
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    lol, talk about adware and their pop-ups, need to look at my settings soon, not bad
     
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  7. Feb 22, 2006 at 1:55 PM #7
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    lmao... that is the same tut that I linked in my first post :P
     
  8. Feb 22, 2006 at 2:31 PM #8
    Spunky Monkey

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    lol time for more beer for me then lol.

    note to self must read post not just look at the pretty pictures lol
     
  9. Feb 22, 2006 at 3:33 PM #9
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    It's an okay cut.
     
  10. Feb 22, 2006 at 4:51 PM #10
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    good work, keep it up
     
  11. Feb 22, 2006 at 5:42 PM #11
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    Little choppy but not bad for a first. Just read some more tuts.
     
  12. Feb 22, 2006 at 5:43 PM #12
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    Didnt mean to post twice. Sorry
     
  13. Feb 22, 2006 at 5:52 PM #13
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    choppy ? what the heck look better man !

    For an first cut that's really really nice.

    few pieces of advice :
    Place points closer together and zoom in a LOT. ( i usually do mine at 600 - 1200%)
    In the start...stay AWAY from hair, as it is PURE evil.

    God invented hair to irritate and frustrate renderers.

    Nice job !
     
  14. Feb 27, 2006 at 10:24 AM #14
    MistFit

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    Thanks for the replies:

    Note to self... render bald people
     
  15. Feb 27, 2006 at 10:30 AM #15
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    Dude that is awesome for your first! Nice work ^_^
     
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