My First Render, Anime?

original - http://www.vimanga.ru/manga

render -

my first render, comments appreciated ^_^

 

What a Cute Render :> white line surrounding the render stands out possibly too much and apart from that its nice, keep practicin and gl

 

thanks alot, yeah shall try a lil harder to lose the white line...any tips on gettin rid of it?

 

practice. and before posting it, try putting the render on different backgrounds with different colours so you can see where you've missed.

btw,this goes in non-gaming.

keep at it

 

thanks for the tip, much needed as this is my first render, thanks!

 

Lol Nice 1