I know now that I picked a really bad render by looking at his fingers and the I did the bottom left side of his staff really badly but i guess no one is gonna use that part... anyway, heres the original: final:
damn... stupid image hosters.. wow. that looks worse the what it looks on my harddrive.. need a prper image hoster..
def a good first render...agreed that it is a bit choppy but keep practicing and that will get way better...nice work