3 things: 1) Quote text needs some work 2) Needs some light. Not alot, but some. 3) Why did put Ragnarok when the image is from Noir??
1.I don't like the grid spanning the entire image.... If you had the grid on a seperate layer then delete the parts either over the image or over the bg, or use a layer mask. 2.The effect on the main text is nice but I couldn't read it (just not enough contrast between bg and fg, but it's not necessarily a bad thing) 3. Quote font is plain... If you wanted it to be a simple font (just out of preference or style), I might suggest adding a quote box to add a little detail. 4. BG's a little plain, but it looks good anyway. OA I like it, but I like details :-D