My First Lp

C+C+R Please

 

abit plain, abit bright and looks abit pixely to me.
if you want an honest opion.... i dont like it

 

i must say I dont like this color so i dont like this picture.
you could put some render in it.it is too empty

 

it looks like something is wrong with the quality

 

not much going on. and the text needs some work. not horrible for a first.

 

i dont like the colour honestly it hurt my eyes but still nice idea maybe if you add a diff colour and if you meant plain gd job

 

Kinda Bright.

 

How about this? Any better?

 

Its empty. It needs something. The blue one is much better tho.

 

Better?

 

don't see much of a change. But I like the blue one better.

i doesn't necessarily need a render in it, it just needs...something in the top right corner. Even some text, like a poem. As long as it keeps the theme of the LP...it could work.

 

To plain and bright for me.