My First Lay-out

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  1. Jul 9, 2005 at 6:02 AM #1
    ¤¤©Hansiej¤¤©

    ¤¤©Hansiej¤¤© Active Member

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    my first lay-out
    my first lay-out
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  2. Jul 9, 2005 at 6:09 AM #2
    himster

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    Don't like it. It's too plain, pixelated and boring.
     
  3. Jul 9, 2005 at 6:10 AM #3
    FM Lawlhalla

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    well the text is ugly, try to use another font, and dont make it that big.
    also make buttons of the nav bar, nota long stroke with only the text on it.
    put some lines between every word.
    use some more effects.
     
  4. Jul 9, 2005 at 7:00 AM #4
    echoepidemic

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    AGH!

    OMG AGH!

    OMG WTF!!! AGH!!!
     
  5. Jul 9, 2005 at 7:42 AM #5
    skandalouz

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    i shud -rep you for being such a cock, its his first layout obviously. he needs help, not people saying its too horrible to look at. keep it up dude, just checkout some tuts. theres a nice beginners layout tut on www.greycobra.com!
     
  6. Jul 9, 2005 at 11:16 AM #6
    FM Phalis

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    hmm thats to simple doesnt have any effect to it :huh: nice try tho ^_^ keep the work up ull get bettr ;)
     
  7. Jul 9, 2005 at 11:21 AM #7
    ghettolt

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    looks like it was done in paint...did u ever see a website like that? No, so why would you wanna make one like that? Get ideas from other templates, good ones...
     
  8. Jul 9, 2005 at 1:34 PM #8
    echoepidemic

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    I should -rep you for threatening me.
     
  9. Jul 9, 2005 at 4:32 PM #9
    pitviper_73

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    Well lets see..... The text is WAY too big and never use that heavy of a stroke on anything. I think you have a basic idea on how to lay out a temp you just need some more study and practice. Do some tuts, check out the other members work here on the forums and just keep practicing. Post again and let us see how you have developed.
     

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