Pretty good, but heres some tips: 1.) Try making your focal point more sharpened, blurring it too much can really mess it up. Use: Filter>Sharpen>Sharpen. 2.)Try using C4D or Abstract brushes, that makes your tag really pop out. If you want C4D Packs go on DeviantArt and also for PS brushes too! Or try BrushKings Hope this helps
Try reading some tutorials. Very basic and yea don't blur ur render lol cuz its suppose to be ur focal point and blurring it too much makes it blend in and look weird..