My First Every Render

ok this is the first render i have every tryed, so im needing alots of pointers...specialy on the hair

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i know its bad, but like i said its my first and im needing alot of pointers, incase it makes a difference i used Paintshop --- X for this

regards

WeeBee

 

nice render

 

It's good but for some reason it looks choppy (could be my computer). You did a nice job on the hair for a first render.

 

Desu?

i think its pretty nice and usable, except for the hair.

 

for a first render its pretty good,
except for like what Casanova said.
the hair and a weird whiteness inbetween her shirt and her bazooka

 

Its actually pretty choppy when maximized. When minimized it looks pretty usable though. Nice job.

 

yeah the wierd whiteness is 100% my fault, i was zoomed in so far i never saw the blend between the background and the bazoka, so i cut down and then had to follow my cut back up and round, if you wanting to use this for anything feel free, i'm needing advised on the hair, i usedthe laso tool for all of this

 

not bad for your first man, keep trying.

 

If thats your first render then i must say that brilliant job mate (Y)

 

Good job on your first render. Keep practicing and you'll eventually get better. Try using some of the render tutorials around here, they're helpful.

 

the whole thing looks pretty good to me the hair looks like it needs some work though

 

If you click on the image to full size you see lots of pixels on the outline.
You tackled a harder one for your first one, keep on Rendering .
(Look up tutorials on using the pen and stuff, if you can stand it you might want to like double size it and cut it out than downsize it to normal and use it to select it on the original pic. (Sorry I forget the layer shortcut commands for it, but its in a tutorial)

 

keep pluggin good one for the first

 

Excellent for your first one mate. Keep practising!

 

its a really good try for your first go! keep it up and you will be really good at it