My First Banner

Alright this is my first banner and it needs more work but for a beginner its okay or at least to me it took me like 30 mins in total including this posting so yeah...
I do want to learn that text pixel effect but I havent found a tutorial on it

here it is



give me your best and worst comments,suggestions and critisism

 

pretty good just slow it down man cant read it that fast

 

My worst comment would be slow it down. The rest looks pretty ok, i had to watch it about 50 times to work that out though.

 

alright Ill slow it down anything else ?

 

well as i'm sure your point is it not to be to cluttered, then i would say the only problem is the speed as well.. its a nice banner

 

Very nice, just too fast Look-wise, its sharp, and very clear. Nice job on it

 

Looks good, nice and clean, well done.

You could however slow it way down and only make like one add.. you've merged about 10 offers together.

 

alright then Ill do that and thanks guys ill update my post with the improved banner once Im done.

 

Speed it up when showing similar products, slow it down at the sales pitch and you got a nice banner gj

 

Yeah, just slow it down.

Also be consistent on the text positions frame to frame.

 

Slow it down and reduce the amount of content.

 

here are the remades of my first banner


v1







v2



I think v2 will be the best because it has the least amount of frames and info

and they have changed to 1sec. each not sure it to try to 2secs. each ?

 

v2 i like more than the 1st and v1 nj