Thats pretty cool, i like the text, but the render doesnt blend very well with the bg and it should be bigger 7/10
It probably is one of your best. Text goes pretty well with the background.. But the render just looks wierd.. Dunno why.. But it just doesn't seem to work..
The second one is a pretty bid better but the render should match more, and yes a bid bigger would be nice to
the 3rd one as it has that little hint of another colour, maybe if you could introduce the same shade into the text it may work. But good work there m8y