Dude.... I mean, c'mon, Dude!... have you ever, like, used a C4D before? Using C4D's on a dark, relatively untextured background is much harder than you think. His placement and use of this C4D is great. I think maybe you should work on your work a bit and then come critiquing. On topic: This is awesome man. Text is f***ing awesome, and the style and feel of your work is awesome. 8.5/10 KIU!