I'm not really great with C&C but I'll try..lol The main thing I see is the empty space....its not mandatory that you have your tag filled, but if you should have negative space like that have the effects sorta work with it (sorry I can't come up with a good example of how to avoid that). Experiment a lot with effects and see what works good in that department. And one other thing you can do is work on the lighting cuz it seems to be coming from everywhere... Hopefully that was all said clearly and properly...lol.. B)
