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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by hells, Oct 2, 2008.

  1. hells

    hells Well-Known Member

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    C n C like always guys.

    Thank you! :D
     
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    I like it. It's nice and simple-looking.

    The wireframe C4D on the left looks a bit awkward, though.
     
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    thank you, i will see what i can do, i just got the power back on at my house the whole street went out. haha. keep em coming :D
     
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    Effect placement is pretty bad, you put it on his neck and shoulders so it looks really weird, like a random neck and head. to accentuate the depth you were trying to develop try using stronger lighting. Show more body on your renders / stocks.
     
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    The text blends in too much where you placed it. Try changing the color or something so its a bit more legible. Also I agree with the Wireframe to the left, I'd like to see what the piece looks like without. Besides that you've got a good clean sig on your hands ;).
     
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    i think if you move the wireframe down, underneath the text, and flow it with that pen tool design to the left of his head, it'll look better.

    But goodwork :D
     
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    thank you. i will play around with it in the morning. i am tired and im about to play some soul calibur 4 haha.
     
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    Make the wireframe flow with the pentooling you have. So move it over in those areas and erase parts you don't need.

    I suggest you to add in a stock that has nice coloring and details in on Lighten, and move over to the effects near the guy's shoulders.
     
  9. chipmunk2k5

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    I like the work a lot most of your work is good

    I don't like the text on this one that would be my only thing on this the rest looks okay to me
     

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