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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Blacklite, Aug 29, 2009.

  1. Blacklite

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    i love it when im bored.
     
  2. Strykor

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    So lemme have a look at it.
    I like the flow you applied on the signature and that you obviously changed the
    eye color, I dunno if you did that with filters or something. :D Good work here, ethe flow
    is definitely there.
    You have to work on your lighting, it really all looks like dark and just some
    spots are light.

    Wha I do not like about the signature are 3 things.
    First that the hair at the bottom is red and not blond anymore. This somehow does not fit.
    Second, there are sometimes vertical lines in the signature although the flow goes diagonally.
    The third thing is that there are some 'strange' lines on the face of that woman.

    Fix those thigns up ^.^
     
  3. Blacklite

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    that look on the face is for that android vibe thing goin on.
     
  4. Hoplite_A2

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    Excellent CnC mate! We need more comments like these. Let's bring the old GR back.

    Now, from looking at the tag I most definitely agree that you had some good flow going there. Need to work on lighting.
    I'm sure this tag taught you a lot of things. The white chunk on the right kills the flow and upsets the overall composition of the tag as well.

    Don't think I'm being mean or rude. I say things honestly so that you can grow in your PS skills so you can really make exactly what you have in mind. ;)
    GR is here to Criticize and encourage. So don't get down. Keep working and continue to gain more skill!

    Good work mate.
     

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