looks cool but you really need to emphasis the focal point it's really hard to see the render as a whole use some blurring techs to help bring the focal out more and this would be a sick tag for sure
Very cool concept. I don't like how confusing it is. It's VERY dark, so it's hard to see. It looks like there's some high-quality effects in there, but it's too hard to see cause of how dark it is. Fix those levels and I think it'll be soo hot.