Mgs 4

Got a few versions

 

last post for the night
no ones given you one so i will
i do somewhat like it

but its too plain towards the bottom
the alteration between the sharp grainy effect to the flat smudging is whats ruining it for me
if there was a way to make it gradually change it would be better
liking v2 great colors

 

Yeah I'm trying to think of something =/, cant though xD. I'll post up some new versions in a little

 

Not to bad! I like the colored version better. The only thing that doesn't appeal to me is the smudging on the bottom half.