Matt Bellamy Muse

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Absolution, Apr 10, 2008.

  1. Absolution

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    Well, this is my first sig in a really long time.. i don't like it very much .. but anyway can i get some C&C ?
     
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    I don't really like it either..

    Absolution need to go. it's just THERE, specially since its 100% opac and right next to the focal. make the render a little smaller maybe, so the face is in the middle of the signature, unless of course you want his chest to be the focal :tongue:
    work on the depth too

    with some work it could really be good though

    just my opinion
     
  3. Strykor

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    Okay, at first the text is ugly... really, this is no offensive but just remove it or change it, whatever.
    The lighting is a bit off and the background looks plain. Try to work more with C4D renders to get the flow. The guitar
    at the left from the person is not fitting at all.
    The render seems a bit lq anyways. Work on your compo / lighting / depth imo.

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  4. Absolution

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    thanks for the comments

    i won't see it as offensive :P
    i know it's pretty bad, but i've been away for a while so i'll try to get better again :P
    and for the text.. i tried to remake the muse logo but with my name in it.. i know i had to blend it but i was in a hurry.
     

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