Nice style. I like the effect you put in the background. You have to work better on your lighting / text / focal. Blur the outsides, burn the outsides, add the text to the focal. This gets away the distraction.
That text doesnt fit mate, do it halfway into the tag so it'll blend with the effects and adjustment layers.
nice colours and effects perhaps keep all your text together nice and close to your focal and then perhaps some burn tool to help with depth and lighting
