Magic

its for a sig battle on another site....dont know wat i can to make it better....

any suggestion....

 

idk im liking it, it looks like
something needs to be in more focus to my eyes
either the focal or lighting not sure

but i personally think it looks good
nj

 

I like it. The big yellow empty space on the right kind of brings it down just a tad, but it's not over-whelming. I think it needs more depth....pretty monotone IMO. Maybe burn it a little to darken it a tad? I love the artistic feel to it though. Great job.

 

thanks for the tips....

 

did wat yall said and looks much better imo....thanks alot....