made for a friend C&C pls

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by yaiQuem, Oct 8, 2010.

  1. yaiQuem

    yaiQuem Well-Known Member

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    v1[​IMG]

    lil messy, yet i like the outcome myself

    C&C pls, i wanna know what i did wrong so i can skip that mistake next time ;)

    v2[​IMG]
     
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    Its not to bad. The one thing I dont like is the b4d looks like its just sitting there with the render. Maby move it around a bit and try blending the render and c4d in a little more. The text on the right is really well dont but the left side needs some work. Other than that really well done man keep it up!
     
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    ok updated the first post.
    i agree on the c4d n blending :X u were right. i fixed it quick, but i'm not satisfied with the smudging on top of the head, so i'll change that in the future.
    the text on the left (producedbyQ) is more some sort of watermark cause i made this sig for some1 else.
     
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    Lot's going on, creating the messy look but I think outcome is cool.

    Fixing the brightness on some parts might make this flow better,

    lastly I know it's your "watermark" black text is cool. size and position are legit, just a choice of different text I believe. :)
     
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    Ohh ya and i think put some oppacity lowering on the c4d it just looks to out of place if you now what i mean.
     
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    To me the only "BIG" problem I see is that you're missing depth. Add depth and balance out some darkness, shadows, midtones and highlights for an even better result.
     
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    ur sigs always at first glance seem very cool, but at a second look, a couple issues appear...i like the messy look here but I can only make out the smiley face, so if that's it then its fine :P...colors are nice...text is fine, a different font would be better tho...and yea, like Elpida said, the darkness and highlights needs to be balance out more
     

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