Pretty tight work, but it lacks "X" factor. Needs something that makes you want to look at it. Throw in some dynamic colours, mix it up.
& hoplite A2 You are the man, thanks a bunch for the detailed c&c! +rep for being such a nice c&cer and taking time to comment 99.99% of my threads in this section and giving me good criticism. & retaL thanks & SM Cliche ill try to make a few sigs with versions without the borders from now on for ya so you can get the full view of it. thanks a bunch mate! &rss4560 thanks mate, i appreciate the stare &Miasma yeah i was using that to try and bring out the focal point better. &Xed well i didnt think it was a bad thing using the stock as the bg. oh well though i guess its not the best move. &Haemon obviously havent read the books &[.BC] inverse thanks i also finally got you to like my work, which is a personal achievement i have been unofficially shooting for!
