Lovers Dream

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  1. kirbir

    kirbir Senior Member

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    This has been resized somewhat.

    cnc please :)
     
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    Hmm i am not a fan of the pink borders or what not

    think you could have great potential with this by removing the text or displacing it in a nother spot...you could use the render easily with the text to makesomething great but thisas it is...is...is...so so....average work...could improve a lot :unsure:

    6/10

    You should deinfatly rework this...id like to see what else you could do with it....
     
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    ..... :unsure: ...your a tard... ^_^ .... :eek:
     
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    lol

    Thanks for the comment :)
     
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    np, just doing my piece to corrupt america and beyond!!!! :rofl: B) :wub:
     
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    hahaha :D
     
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    Cool stuff I like it...
     
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    Thanks for the comment :)
     
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    It looks good, and I am a huge fan of fractal art, but much like the others said, the border is a bit over powering on the image and really takes the attention away from it, rather the accenting it.
     
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    Ok, thanks hun, thanks for moving this for me also, totally forgot about this section :)
     
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    Sweet piece!! :)
     
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    Thanks hun :D
     
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    i love it :) the pink its really sexy and hot

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    it’s a blur shot? To me I can see a love shaped engagement ring with satanic marks around it trying to penetrate the light that the fairies are giving off
     
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    The fractal is missing contrast and lighting, the border is 10x overpowering, and the text is huge and boring.

    The border should be changed to 1 px bright pink, the text should be about 12 size: say something like Daryl and Kirbir: A Lover's Dream. Something of that nature, small and in one of the corners would look nice with this piece.

    The colors of the piece are pleasing, but are too dull and dark. Brightening or contrasting the fractal itself would help give live to the piece, and not be so boring.

    Good concept, just the technique is rather unfurnished. 5/10 for me.
     
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    Its only my second try, lol

    Thanks for the comments guys, but i like it how it is. Thank you all for the suggestions though :)
     
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