Yes, simple. But I do believe you could've done more, with it still being very simple. For instance, you can have a white bg and no flashy effects, but still do some subtle things to the BG to give some depth. But, yes, the tag has an appealing thing to it. ^_^ I like the bottom version because the jam looks better. ><
white doesnt exactly help portray "loneliness".... and yeah u could work on the bg to help portray the emotion u want to