Lotus

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by DutchBlood, May 31, 2010.

  1. DutchBlood

    DutchBlood Well-Known Member

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    please tell me what you think about it;)
     
  2. nicotaku

    nicotaku Well-Known Member

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    well my initial reactions was wow. bec you had a nice flow and color scheme going on but then i went from wow to ok. text is badly placed imo
     
  3. DutchBlood

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    no one else got a oppinion?
     
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    ditto about the text, I figure it would be best without it. Maybe take your motion blur off the car to get the feel that the background is moving behind it or to make the car stand out more possibly
     
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    I thought the text was fine, although you could have left it out and just had the "LOTUS" be the text.

    Other than that, I like the colors, but it could use a bit more dramatic lighting and the effects in the upper left corner could have a bit more direction/flow. And I think some adjustment layers could help tie all the colors together a bit.
     
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    Thx for comments, will see what i can do with it
     
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    I don't like your text. It ruins the focal point and it's distracting. Also try toning down the light effects on your headlights because it's also distracting. KIU ;)
     

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