. : Lost-planet : .

made this one yesterday quite like it

some feedback and tips would be excellent :tongue:

 

You overdid the lightning, and text doesn't suit imo. But nice tag overall, good depth.

 

nice depth
lightings a little too much
text looks pretty good

 

Yeah, I have to agree. The lighting is a tad too strong. Maybe lower the opacity on that a little bit. Other than that, nice effects and composition. =]

 

thanks for the feedback guys,really helpful
anymore?

 

Maybe swap the text around, have the little text Pixelation (I assume it's Pixelation) and the top text whatever font the bottom one is.

 

You need more stuff happening on the right side, it's a tad imbalanced as it stands right now, the clipping masks don't fill it in well enough.