yeah the sig could be cool, but the brush strokes are wwaaaayyy to heavy (as you can see I used them in my current, but they are much softer and les noticable) and colors are kinda odd, nice job none the less
whats with that half border thing, and i think you need to just add a little more contrast, that would make it look hot.
It's a good start. Polish up the brush strokes and make Lora stand out more so we can see her better. She looks like she's camoflauged in there.
