Lonely Soldier

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  1. Quinn

    Quinn Well-Known Member

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    It pretty much came out how I wanted it to be.

    C&C?
     
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    It's really dark and chaotic. Umm, the lighting is okay, just the middle-right one is a bit random, aside from that it's alright.

    Really contrasted and the dark spots on both the left and the right are well done to show the feel of Turok. Umm, could use a color balance though.

    GJ.
     
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    I thought about removing that light source might do so and post an updated version (with some color balance aswell then).

    Thanx for the comment.
     
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    The lighting is forced, and it does not look good.
    The effect's are messy.
    The composition isn't too horrible.
    :)
     
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    Something about the blending rubs me the wrong way. The render seems out of place.
    Needs a color balance.
     
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    Bit too much contrast but other than that, nicely done.
     
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    Thanx for the comments :)


    I made 2 new versions, a more green color balance and one more brown color balance. I also removed the light source.

    Is it better now and which one do you prefer?
     

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