Logo

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  1. .Illuzion

    .Illuzion Well-Known Member

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    Here we go again with the corporate branding package.... this time it is not a project but merely just me making a piece or my portfolio to show off to my future employer. First im showing only the logo so that it can be critiqued by you guys and then the rest will begin work after I get the amount of criticism and comments that I think make the overall design improve or until you guys say go forth with it.

    <div align="center">COLORED VERSION:
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    BLACK AND WHITE VERSION:
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    the tree is hand drawn and nothing is set in stone yet if you guys have better ideas for the logo shoot them my way. Uses only two colors just different tint percentages on the greens.


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    i like the colored version but i don't like the tree in the colored vers. i think it is to plain
     
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    The coloured version is the best goes with the theme tho
     
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    Logo lacks proper dimension. It's taller than it is wide, and it's full of unusable white space.
     
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    ok so I need to make the tree trunk a little wider and make the tree not as tall? I dont get what you mean by too much unusable white space inverse...
     

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