Like... 45% Done...

Ok, this is a project I started some time ago, I never got around to finish it, but I'm looking for other peoples opinion.

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/260/site6wn.png

 

dude you better remove that white strokes or else
they totally ruin it

 

Yeah get rid of the white. And that random line on the navigation. Fix the font too.

 

Yeah,srry i don't like it...3/10

 

i dont like that at all with the white=( if u get rid of the white it looks pretty good

 

All it is, is the white, so if he got rid of it, there would be nothing...

IMO it's really excellent and I really like the originality of the head part.

I think it should be in a darker, brushed red though

 

Thanks all, yeah I agree with you... removing the white would make it really bad...

 

Thanks all, yeah I agree with you... removing the white would make it really bad...

 

its cool...

 

It's not bad, but it's really hard to say much about it when it's not finished. Add in some more details, get a banner in there, and then I think it would look a lot better. Also, I'm not a huge fan of the amount of black, maybe have a lighter color close to black somewhere in there.

 

very nice drawing (Y)

 

Really keep that white it gives a nice touch I think

And you should finish it and brush it a bit more so it looks a bit more random

 

i think your attempting to give the websites logo a sharpened razor wire kind of outline with the white, perhaps an outline that starts dark like the template and only gets a little whiter, the white makes it too vibrant for now.

I love the creativity on the design tho, but as i said, id recommend making the white outline more into a sharp edge kind of look, like an axe or something.

 

Some inspiration I think you might need, this should help you if you look at the general design of these templates. Don't become too heavily inspired as there popular websites.

http://www.sigoftheweek.com/

http://www.clantemplates.com/templates/def...orn2battle.html