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First time I just winged it without any type of preferences.

CnC plz ^^

 

imo, its a bit chaotic. you should'nt hide the render in so many effect erase a bit more of the sharpening around spawn and i think it'll just look cleaner. thats all though, everything else is cool ^^

 

u over did the effects by a little bit

 

I couldn't find the focal for about 2 minutes, so I would blur or erase some of those effects on the left. Other than that, the effects are tight, just too much of em. ^_^

 

Looks a bit messy, focal needs to be stronger...get rid of the stripes aswell.

 

Its a bit too sharp and messy - lots of blank space.