These are pretty much the same as my other works, except this time I took some others' advice and tried to lighten them up: lemme know what you guys think, cnc appreciated!
well, the positive thing is the LIGHT and the font. try to blend it a lil more, i mean put on some flow. get some ideas and throw them on the render. USE C4D's...for playing around with and youll see it will work! just keep it up and practice cheers
Agreed, you are definitely getting better. Now that you got the hang of lighting, you need to work on your background. The style most used today is usually a stock behind a render (like a landscape scene with a Ninja in front, or something along those lines). Start doing that and you'll be on your way to success.