Your name sounds familair lolz.. anyway bad compo m8.. make the focal a bit smaller (like showing some more shoulder).. V3 is best.. also work on your text ..
nice tag, gift whtever it is i like the placement of the text is looks well coolm the effects are nice aswell. The smusge isnt the greatest jus work on a bit and it would look much better. The colours are the best at the top coz the other ons dont look right for some reason. Maybe create some more effects near the neck.