Right side is too plain. The lighting is good, effects fit well, coloring is ok. Its a good sig overall. Also I think its a little too big, it may be more appealing if it were smaller.
I like the "away" part of the text. The drift text kind of bothers me. Make it touch the away or something :] I like the sig, it has good flow, lighting, focal, and contrast. The effects look nice as well. Good beans