Latest Work #2

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by -Y2K-, May 17, 2010.

  1. -Y2K-

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    C&C, thoughts appreciated, suggestions welcome. Thanks.
     
  2. violentcrushxxv

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    Nice! I love Eminem too!
     
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    i like the effects, his left arm seems a little weird though. it might look better if you have the skull overlay on his arm more because the other part of the "bg" or what ever goes over his shoulder so i think the skull should too. just thinking out loud, good job
     
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    Well,IMO this tag need somes adjustments.First,i think it's too bright,i would darken the edges a bit,also the shadow of his right arm is very distracting in the bright area.That blue line effect that coming out of the dynamite sticks not looks good,i would erase it,your render is too much blended IMO,i would suggest also to add somes clipping masks on thoses whites splatters.For the flow,i can see the left part of the tag got somes in the background,but kinda ruins it because of the other effects that looks scattered all over the tag.Don't get me wrong m8,it's not a bad piece,like i said above,you just need to make somes fixes.Good luck and KIU:)
     

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