Well, it has no depth, no good lighting, it is too big and it has no good effects. To be honest, read tutorials.
No depth? hmmm. I used like 20 diffrent layers. I could try and use more opacity. I don't really know what you mean with the lightning. And yes I could see it is to big. Got any ideas for a good signature size?
Yeah, to be honest, they're not very good. You gotta start somewhere. The best thing to do when you're getting starting in GFX or aren't very experianced is read tutorials. Even though they are other people's techniques they will teach you and get you comfortable with ps. Then you will spark your own ideas and make your own techniques. eat up some tuts and let's see whatcha got! Edit: Feel out a signature size. I would say start off with something somewhat small (275x120) or something and when you get better and can rip some serious smex go to a larger canvas for more workspace (400x150 or so). Edit, edit: lol Depth isn't created by using more layers. I can throw a hundred layers on a sig and all I'll get is a busy, probably bad looking tag. :\ Depth is created when images in the signature look further apart from each other. Like this for instance - This is a tag I made that has BAD depth. Everything looks flat, see? Here's a good example now: See how the building looks like it's behind spiderman? And by syncronizing the stock's perspective with the perspective of the render you can facilitate good depth as well. A quick way to learn depth is to burn parts that need to be shadowed. Don't overburn though. Look up some tuts on it. ^_^ A lot of them teach about it as it is something that can make or break a tag. *takes a deep breath* Whew! Time to go to bed. ^_^ Hope that helped.
I agree with the above. Needs more depth. It's also a bit large, hun. Also, try to not use two renders in two totally different areas of a tag, because that creates 2 separate focals, and if the text is also in a different place, that makes 3 focals. Try to create more depth and flow by using different techniques like smudging and C4Ds (check out the free tutorials section ). Try using a different font too. Sans fonts like Tahoma, Arial, Calibri, Impact, Verdana, etc. Those normally work best for tags if you don't have a good font to match the theme. Not bad for a beginner. Keep workin, hun.
yea its ok too big tho(both of em) and no depth, the second one maybe try using motion or putting a little to the side try c4ds and maybe pentooling
