CnC please and im just free lancing right now cause gimp doesnt have all the thing ps has so some tuts i cant really follow but im upgrading soon
I could try to give you some "lessons" or something when I am back home. Just stick to photoshop, you will just love it lateron. It really looks so random again, like the back ground has nothing to do with the foreground. You have to start maybe the smudging. Set the render in the full size in the background, and start smudging a little bit around, try some different adjustments and add some filters to it, it will look much better than now. You added some c4d right? I would, as a beginner, stick to the original c4d effects which you simply set on color dodge or something of that bracket, I do not know the special word in english since my ps is german. ^^ Anyway there is some improvement, you can see that you slowly get used to the different things you can do with signatures which is good. Just experiment a bit around and soon you will get the hang of it.
I Dont Have Photoshop atm i have gimp but im working on gettin PS cause i used it in school and its way better than gimp cause gimp is missing some of the things i need