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  1. legenddurn

    legenddurn Well-Known Member

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    Ok havn't posted my recent work for a while, comments and CRITICS needed.

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  2. [.BC.] KriPTiQ

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    I really like #2 and 4 but your text is killin most of em. gj none the less
     
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    Cool concepts, execution, colour and compo needs work.
     
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    Thanks... anymore.
     
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    legenddurn Well-Known Member

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    Bump ..?
     
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    these are actually really good. i like your style
     
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    that says it quit nicely, you have some sweet ideas for depth and overall look, but the overall image could use work
    try keeping the main image clearer and try some new things with text
    nice work ;)
     
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    i meant to get to this one but i missed it. heres what i think

    ^one;*****
    i really lke the way this is put together. the blurring and effect makes it seem liek the girl is coming right out of the picture and truthfully the text doesnt either take away or add to the picture, and it just seems to fit in well. i like this one
    ^two;*****
    this one is unlike most signatures i have seen before. you added in good elements into this, and the way the color is done on the side of his head its very abstract and nice. and the lines go very good, creating some nice flow :-)
    ^three;
    not sure about this one, its still go the same style and the text loosk good in it, but not as much of a fave as the others.
    ^four;
    brings back old memories of n64 :-) i like the way its done with DK in the background and again mario seems to be right there popping out at ya, providing a good focal
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    not being mean, but the quality of the render really throws the piece off, it would be good if rid of that render, the borders are too big in this and they blur kinda.
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    i lke this one again, i like the text in it, it doesnt take or give to the signature and fits in well to me. the colours are nice and the render seems a little grainy in some areas, but good work on it in general

    all together i like your style, its very interesting and i would love to see more of it, keep me up to date when you get more stuff coming out!

    -Anesthetik
     
  9. legenddurn

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    Thanks a lot, + rep for detailed reply.

    EDIT : need 150 posts. Will + rep when reached. Thanks.

    Any more?
     
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    c4d seems obvious or too simple. yet you used it very well with #2, that one is my fav by far. mostlys id say u just need to blend it toghther more.

    1- seems too look ok, yet the c4d, blurred bg are the only huge effects that stand out to people. get a lighitng source in there or something, you gotta blwo peoples minds

    2- as i said my fav of the bunch, simple yet artistic effect

    3- colors, ah feeling weird with the colors. c4d placement is good, yet once again add a light source to brighten it up., not much depth either

    4- effects arent there, but i have to admit this looks really cool. the blur effects are hot. good manip

    5- render is really grainy, fidn a high quality one :tongue:

    6- text aint workin... back to basics
    -lighitng
    -more effects, less c4d
    overall ok piece.

    conclusion: 2 is the best

    to work on:

    -text ( dont need to go all crazy with it)
    -add some effects (clipping mask, spatters, even smudging


    and biggest and most important for next time... add lighting source! it will give so much dept th and feel.

    ok theres my full 6 piece CNC
    enjoy
     
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    not bad overall i think u can make few impvoesment like ur border try making it smaller and with the sogs give them a flow...so they all look i dont knw like its got some direction to it.Also maybe some shrepen and bluroing could be used in some of those tags..esp the girl one with the ball.
     
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    Appreciated. Thankyou
     

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